meri hasratein unke liye hairatein ho gayi,
meri khwahishen unke liye bandishen ho gayi….
unki ibadat me jo jhukali ye nigahen
unki nazar me vo meri berukhi ho gayi….
unke liye vo unki be-ehetraami ho gayi….
har lamha jo khatm ki kurbatein unse,
unke liye vo duriyan hi raks-e-musalsal ho gayi….
unki hasi me hi apni khushiyan talab ki ,
unke liye meri hasi bhi gam ka sabab ho gayi….
unke deedar ke liye in nigahon me kashish,
unke liye vo zindagi ki kashmakash ho gayi….
unke hatho se fisal gayi jo ret ki tarah,
vo hamare rishte ki taqdir ban gayi….
na rahi hairatein, toot gayi bandishein,
na rahi kurbatein, kashish kashmakash ho gayi….
taqdeer se vo meri zindagi ban gayi….
6 comments:
This poem of yours relates so much to the title of your blog. What do I say about it.. Very touching..
And by the way, ur urdu is too good..
keep coming:)
kyun aise log milte hain jo zindagi ban jaate hain aur taqdeer mita dete hain...
kyun aise log milte hain jinki qadr mein hum zindagi mita dete hain...
something is wrong with somewhere...
but you write extremely well...
@ Varsha
thanks for visiting and this comment also relates to something on my blog....i told u i owe my writing skills to someone and credit for this urdu also goes to same person.
@ Anusha
wah wah!!
u have given the jist of my all the poems actually........
thanks & keep visiting :-)
Nice da..loved this one...the words are superb...kitni sahi language(urdu) hai..and thoughts are superub...keep writing :-)
@ anusha
vaise what is the something that is wrong somewhere
wish could write like you...u have lots of qualities within u...itne busy rehne ke baad bhi how do u manage to write such wonderful poems!!! great yaar!!!
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