Wanted to start off this blog with a narration but was not been able to give a proper shape to its end. I just don’t understand why ending is always been difficult. When I started writing, thoughts were flowing like anything that I wrote almost 3/4th in 10 minutes flat. But the ending is yet to happen even after trying so hard for last almost a week.
Ending has always been troublesome n painful for me. Whether it’s a blog or a relation, the ending has to be complete. But could not complete it that’s why pen down something that goes like this……….
Adhura Manzar……….
Is raat ke us paar ka manzar adhura hai………
Eent-patthar se makaan to ban gaya,
par mere rishto ke bina ab ye mukaam adhura hai.
Aaj kuch khwab hain jo mukammal se lagte hain,
Par kal subah inka anjaam adhura hai.
Na jaane tumse hui mulaqatein kitni,
Phir bhi mukammal milne ka armaan adhura hai.
Kal sahar ka aftaab to naya hai,
Par beeti raat ka har sach adhura hai.
Hum to ishq ka aagaaz kar baithe,
Par unke ishq ka andaaz adhura hai.
Is raat ke us paar ka manzar adhura hai………..
Trying hard to complete “yeh kahan aagaye hum” because someone has already said “waqt ne kiya kya hasi sitam”.
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4 comments:
First things first..
Welcome to the world of blogging...May you write so much that blogger is forced to increase their server spaces, and may you get so many comments that you find it difficult to reply to one and all.. Amen! :-)
Coming back to your post now. Interesting thoughts. I have a very funny idea about the ending of relations. It has to end because it is already over..And it would not have been painful if there was already not too much pain in it.. :-)
But do finish it up soon..The post I mean..Nahi to mere jaisa likhne ka..na dimag lagaane ka na emotion.. ;-)
Keep it coming...
@anusha
thanks for the comment....but seems aapki dua kabool nahi hui. It took me so long to reply because waited so long for the comments but shayad noone else could bear with them.
just wana say ki i may be owing my writing skills to anyone but blogging i owe only to you :-)
hume owe kar rahe ho...
aur blog chod ke ja rahe ho...
Kya baat hai :-|
@ anusha
Blog to rahega main jaa raha hun
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